Joe was the new kid in school.From moment he walked through the doors he wanted everyone to think he was cool. He walked in and pushed the first person that got in his way. The boy turned around to hit him back, but the look in Joe's eye gave the boy a cold chill down his back so he walked away. As Joe walked into the classroom he saw a pertty girl in the back of the room. He walke dover to her and said,"DAMMMMMN!Girl you looking really goooood, I just want to take you home".She looked at him then at her friend and said, "Boys can be so lame, they think they can get everything they want".
"Well BITCH I can. Youdon't know how many hoes I get and how many of them want me to be their man or even want me to talk to them. So watch who the hell you talking to and how you talking to me". He walked away and started looking for a seat. There was a seat in the the back of the room in the corner. He sat down waiting to get the day started so it could end. The teacher came in and saw that he was a new kid and was not sitting where she wanted him to sit so she went over and asked him to move. He looked looked up at her and said " No, know go teacher this boring asssss class so I can go home". The thought to herself for a moment and she know that fighting with him was not going to make any think better so she walked away and started to talk about history.
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To Bryanna,
ReplyDeleteI liked your story. I think your deep message says a lot. Like Victor's paper, which I read before, in the story you interpret how fear of a person can trick others into thinking that feared person is cool. Great Job.
joe is ass i dont know what makes him think he could be cool by doing things like that but overall it was a good story by choosing to talk about how some people would do too much just to fit in.
ReplyDeleteI am getting that being mean is a mean is a theme of being cool. i can also understand why this new kid is mean, he is insecure and this is an easy approach to become cool. this guy is also creating drama which a lot of people get caught up in which makes him an interesting. it makes something to talk about in school. i hope i able able to read more of these-jin
ReplyDeleteBryanna,
ReplyDeleteI liked your story, The message that i get from your story is that the character may have been cool but he still couldn't get the girl that he wanted. The girl he liked rejected him and he acted like he didn't care.