To Julliette
Homework 10
I like that way you set up what you found wrote so that we could understand what you looked up and was able to read what you wrote to get what the article was talking about.
I think that the things that you looked up were good things to look up. I like how you gave one that talked about how people who drink and text are equal to each other. I also like how you found one that talked about how we can't write because we are use to the way we text.
I go agree with the article that talked about teenagers not being about to write because they are use the way that they talk when they use their phone to text. I some times put u instead of you because I think that I am on my phone.
Next time write a little about the 3 article so that people could get what that one was about.
I would like to look up more about people's addiction to Blackberries are equal to a person who has a addiction to drugs or alcohol. I would want to know why is that.
Good job
hw 11
I feel that in this blog you wre really mad and upset about your phone. You wanted something and you could not get it, you felt as if you could not work without your phone.
For you feel this way yea you are a little addicted to your phone which means so is a lot of people in the world to day.
Some times I feel that same way. I feel that some times i can't work with out haveing my phone or ipod by me. When I had to be without a phone like 2 years agao I almost lost it, I felt like I was messing out on everything.
There is notthing taht you have to work one.
You made me feel like I should try harder to live without my phone because what if one day they no long with be around?
Good job
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To brianna...
ReplyDeleteI like your posts. Its clear that you read the books and thought about the author's used words. I agree with your opinion that people who read more dont necessarilly go out more and have a greater social life than those who stay home to play games. You answered questions you came up with from the readings and also asked yourself frequent questions relating to them, i find this to be a great strategy especially when preparing yourself to write an essay. You included great quotes and analyzed them carefully which was also interesting. For your essay to be completely solid, just try correcting any grammar mistakes because it is the little mistakes that hold your paper back. Your point about art being a hammer that we use to shape the world was interesting. Although i slightly agree, i dont agree that feed is a work of art, i find it to be a book full of hidden messages helping us to re-appreciate art. I dont think the book was meant to prove the authors message of kids being dumber these days correct when reading the book, but your right about parts of the book sometimes being a bit confusing. its hard to imagine a world we dont live in when in reality it is the exact same world we live in. I enjoyed reading your posts.